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We are a blade and a bullet,
And we hurt in different ways.
Let's agree to disagree,
On my flaws, and on yours.
On occasion we were a storm
And more often than not
We rained on our parades.
But then we drowned in the dust,
In the ashes of quick remarks
And shades of misunderstanding.
I do not apologise, and nor should you,
For I am me and you are you
I wish you the very best,
And hope you remember me,
In the days of new black
And silly midnight secrets.
Another reject from my creative writing portfolio. The actual good poems will probably be posted once they have been marked.
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SheepRanchSniper Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
could you explain " in the days of new black,and silly midnight secrets" please
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SheepRanchSniper Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
could you explain "in the days of new black,and silly nidnight secrets" please. Like the poem, but dont understand this reference that closes it
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inkandstardust Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012   General Artist
It's about a friendship gone wrong. It's asking for the friend to remember the good times when they think of each other.
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SheepRanchSniper Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
I get ,that's what it is about in general. But what are the specific references to the lines I mentioned? Thanks
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inkandstardust Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012   General Artist
When myself and this friend were younger we went through a bit of an 'emo' phase. I still to this today wear a lot of black clothes but not in that style. But it's an inside joke, and the silly midnight secrets speaks for itself
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SheepRanchSniper Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
explain the "days of new black,and silly midnight secrets" please.
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BlushingRose Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
I really love this. I feel like it could be song lyrics? ~ it has that feel to me, anyway.

Keep writing - you're brilliant at it!
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inkandstardust Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012   General Artist
I just hugged my mom's iPad because of you. It's so lovely when people I don't know say such nice things, it makes you hope you can actually achieve something. Thank you!
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Shadowofthepen Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
I love this poem, when I first saw the title I thought it was gonna be very angsty and hurting but the theme of acceptance of other's flaws is a very inspiring message. I wish I could write poetry as well as you <3
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inkandstardust Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012   General Artist
Thank you, that means a lot as I have a lot of trouble writing it. It's not something that I have a natural desire to write, I'd never written a poem until last November.
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