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We are a blade and a bullet,
And we hurt in different ways.
Let's agree to disagree,
On my flaws, and on yours.
On occasion we were a storm
And more often than not
We rained on our parades.
But then we drowned in the dust,
In the ashes of quick remarks
And shades of misunderstanding.
I do not apologise, and nor should you,
For I am me and you are you
I wish you the very best,
And hope you remember me,
In the days of new black
And silly midnight secrets.
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Another reject from my creative writing portfolio. The actual good poems will probably be posted once they have been marked.
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:iconsheepranchsniper:
could you explain " in the days of new black,and silly midnight secrets" please
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:iconsheepranchsniper:
could you explain "in the days of new black,and silly nidnight secrets" please. Like the poem, but dont understand this reference that closes it
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~inkandstardust Jun 19, 2012   General Artist
It's about a friendship gone wrong. It's asking for the friend to remember the good times when they think of each other.
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:iconsheepranchsniper:
I get ,that's what it is about in general. But what are the specific references to the lines I mentioned? Thanks
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~inkandstardust Jun 20, 2012   General Artist
When myself and this friend were younger we went through a bit of an 'emo' phase. I still to this today wear a lot of black clothes but not in that style. But it's an inside joke, and the silly midnight secrets speaks for itself
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explain the "days of new black,and silly midnight secrets" please.
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:iconblushingrose:
I really love this. I feel like it could be song lyrics? ~ it has that feel to me, anyway.

Keep writing - you're brilliant at it!
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~inkandstardust Apr 14, 2012   General Artist
I just hugged my mom's iPad because of you. It's so lovely when people I don't know say such nice things, it makes you hope you can actually achieve something. Thank you!
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I love this poem, when I first saw the title I thought it was gonna be very angsty and hurting but the theme of acceptance of other's flaws is a very inspiring message. I wish I could write poetry as well as you <3
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~inkandstardust Apr 14, 2012   General Artist
Thank you, that means a lot as I have a lot of trouble writing it. It's not something that I have a natural desire to write, I'd never written a poem until last November.
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